Writing with No Rudder

From

Holloway Editione1.0.0

Updated August 14, 2024
Great Founders Write
Common questions covered here
Why does bad writing cost American businesses nearly $400 billion a year?
What is the root cause of most bad business writing?
Why do my team's emails and docs feel disorganized and unclear?
Show 1 more

You’re reading an excerpt of Great Founders Write, by Ben Putano, writer, entrepreneur, and book publisher. He’s the founder of Damn Gravity Media, a publishing house that inspires and educates tomorrow’s great founders. Purchase now for lifetime access to the book and on-demand video course.

Nothing great is built alone. The best founders are able to rally support around their vision and purpose. They see the future so clearly and vividly, you’d think they’ve already been there. A powerful why is one of the strongest forces behind a successful startup.

But we often forget to identify an equally clear vision and purpose for our writing. We start writing without really knowing what we’re trying to say. And once we do find the point, we don’t edit our work to make it clear. The reader has to slog through lines of rambling just to understand why you wrote them in the first place. It’s exhausting.

Writing this way is like trying to sail a boat with no rudder. Getting to your intended destination is all but impossible, especially in choppy waters. This isn’t just an inconvenience for your readerβ€”it costs your company precious time and actual money.

Josh Bernoff, author of the excellent book Writing Without Bullshit, calculated that poor writing costs American businesses $396 billion every year.

In his survey of workers who write as part of their jobs, Bernoff identified the main concerns they have with bad writing:

  1. Too long

  2. Poorly organized

  3. Unclear

  4. Too much jargon

  5. Not precise enough

  6. Not direct enough

These bad writing habits all have the same root cause: writing without a clear purpose.

When we don’t know what to say, we ramble. Our ideas are all over the place. We speak in vague terms instead of specific details. We use big words to cover up our lack of understanding. We don’t give precise or clear directions. We use phrases like, β€œWhat I’m trying to say is …” or β€œLong story short …” as if this makes up for wasting our reader’s time.

Better writing begins with the end in mind.

And there’s just one question you need to ask yourself to get started.

Why Are You Writing This?

With any powerful tool, careful aim is vitally important. Writing is no different.

Bezos has a clear purpose for every shareholder letter: to reinforce Amazon’s long-term mission of market leadership. Most of the time, your purpose is more mundane, like rescheduling a meeting. Big or small, you need to know what you’re trying to achieve.

Start every piece of writing by asking yourself, β€œWhy am I writing this?” It doesn’t matter if it’s an email or a book. In fact, the shorter the communication, the more important the question.

You’re reading a preview of an online book. Buy it now for lifetime access to expert knowledge, including future updates.
If you found this post worthwhile, please share!